Monday, September 13, 2010

Smoking Speech

4 comments:

  1. I think you could make it more interesting. I think the same.

    Raymond and Josh

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  2. I Think you need to change the voice of the character because it dose not match the character.But it was really interesting.

    jason

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  3. I agree with Jason but it gives a lot of facts. How i agree with jason is because it doen't match the person and it makes it sound boring. Lots of facts but i think you could make your speech a little more interesting because most people that watch it get bored. Nice speech though.

    Connor

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  4. the voice was a girls voice but it was pretty cool i cant find mine


    josh

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